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Lorraine
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Are you sure this is a tunnel???
« on: July 08, 2005, 04:36:51 AM »
Sometimes
I think I can
almost see the surface
where sunlight dapples and breezes lift
I almost can
I think
Sometimes
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« Reply #1 on: July 11, 2005, 03:12:13 AM »
Very nice, Lorraine. Short but deep. Nice writing.

Keep it up, lady. God bless.
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Are you sure this is a tunnel???
« Reply #2 on: July 28, 2005, 03:17:12 AM »
Thanks Caddude.  God bless you too.  
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« Reply #3 on: January 02, 2006, 02:31:36 AM »
short and sweet , thanx lorraine
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« Reply #4 on: January 07, 2006, 10:31:17 AM »
i think i can see it too, in fact im sure i can. and what a beautiful sight. thank you for showing me.
God bless luv2x
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whether you think you can or whether you think you cant.. your absolutely right...
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« Reply #5 on: January 25, 2006, 08:38:27 PM »
you can !
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« Reply #6 on: February 10, 2006, 08:19:20 AM »
By the way....better late than never....... I too have read this over and over.  I like it.
We need to keep finding the light.  It is there when we look for it.

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Are you sure this is a tunnel???
« Reply #7 on: February 10, 2006, 08:27:56 AM »
Thank you Willy.  How karmic that we both logged in to this today.  I so appreciate the positive feedback from everyone, for such a small poem.  You have inspired me to share more.  Hope I get the nerve up.  God bless~~~~

Lorraine
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« Reply #8 on: February 10, 2006, 08:29:34 AM »
thak you for sharing lorranine. beautiful writing.

Every 24 hours we are blessed with a new canvas of life
to make ready for our visions.
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