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"It ain't braggin' if you done it." - Dizzy Dean
« on: January 17, 2008, 09:49:05 AM »
Something to toss into the mix and assert myself -

Susie

HEAR ME

I got me a Voice,
a Woman’s Voice,
Flexible as whim,

Soft as a pup’s milk breath,
Hard as hammer to nail,
a Get The Job Done Voice.   

I got a Strong From The Truth Voice,
a Grown Woman’s Voice,
a Hewn From Life Voice.

Wise, Yes! Tempered, Yes!
A Still-Startled Innocent Voice,
An Age Has Taught Me Youth Voice.

Yeah, I got me a Voice,
A Full Woman’s Voice,
a Unique Endurable My Voice.


No Offense Gentlemen, on the other hand you may recognize this woman.  Wink  Kiss
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« Reply #1 on: January 17, 2008, 10:51:55 AM »
OMG, Momma Susie... I got goosebumps on that one..  I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

You're darn tootin' you have a voice..... we have voices!!!    I want to hear more!!!

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« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2008, 11:45:48 AM »
Wow..That was truly amazing Susie...can relate so much.

Thank you for sharing it!


Hugs,

Lee
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« Reply #3 on: January 21, 2008, 09:36:24 AM »
Susie,

Nice job!!!  Grin I really enjoyed the poem... Waiting to hear more of your voice... Wink

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« Reply #4 on: January 21, 2008, 10:10:00 AM »
That's all kinds of nice, Miss Susie,

You know what?  it would take to music well, too!!!

Thanks for sharing!!!

Take care,


Kerry
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« Reply #5 on: January 21, 2008, 10:11:52 AM »
I really liked this. Great job.

Becky
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« Reply #6 on: January 25, 2008, 05:31:55 AM »
HI Susie

I just want to say very nice, and no offense taken Smiley. You speake only the truth and from the heart.Knowing you all here has given me a grateful heart. the wealth of wisdom the careing arms of support when one thinks i can,nt do this any more.For me i belive that god puts me where i need to be at that pont in time. To read poem or to read of someone eles struggles.Helps me to have a greatful heart.

  thank you  for all you do and most of all for just being you a pretty cool lady

                                                                 pete c Smiley
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« Reply #7 on: March 30, 2008, 01:25:18 PM »
Hey Mom,

Love your poem. You do have a great voice. No one could possibly be offended.

Thanks,

Max
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